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gillywater
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It took a while to get the good stuff (mainly, for Scorpius to stop moping around), but all in all a really great story. I just wish there had been a couple of fluffy chapters tacked onto the end detailing more of Rose and Scorpius as a couple....perhaps a sequel is in order? ;) |
02/19/09 - 11:22PM |
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KariAnn
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Wow, this was absolutely fantastic! |
10/08/08 - 11:04PM |
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potterhead37
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Lovely! Just lovely! Bravo! |
09/20/08 - 09:12PM |
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freshwater
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Well the end of ch. 4 had me a bit worried, but this is a very satisfying ending. Well done! |
09/20/08 - 08:45PM |
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potterhead37
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Love all the fighting! Love it! |
09/20/08 - 08:36PM |
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potterhead37
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You write very well. I think the characterization is spot-on for a teenager. I like how you portray his mild moral objections to sleeping with one person while in love with someone else, and how this is so quickly overridden by hormones and desire. I hope Rose is as jealous as she seems! |
09/20/08 - 08:23PM |
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potterhead37
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What a terrific beginning! I really like how you characterize Scorpius here, and the way he carries his torch for her is very endearing. Nice work. |
09/20/08 - 08:03PM |
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alex858
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OMFGOMFGOMFG
THAT WAS THE BEST ROSE-MALFOY FIC EVAAAAR!
but seriously, sick writing skills...props.
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! |
09/19/08 - 05:43PM |
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melakem
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Hurray! That was a lovely ending! (And I must say, I think the death of an ugly couch is a very small price to pay!
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Thank you! (And I agree!) |
09/19/08 - 01:16AM |
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rcamp
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That was so Jim and Pam! I love it!
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you like! |
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