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mon
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so cute.
Author's Response: Thank you very much
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05/19/08 - 11:12AM |
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ginwannabe
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Oh, how sweet! I love this. I don't think a woman on bedrest should be getting this frisky, but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
Author's Response: They weren't getting that frisky, just a snog on the table. I'm sure Ron would have taken care of her had it gone further :P
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05/17/08 - 10:04PM |
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rubyhill
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This was really sweet, I hope you do a chapter story with Ron and Hermonie. You bring a good scene to humor which is hard to convey, I would love for you to do something fun and sexy with just a touch of humor. Your a great writer keep it up.
Author's Response: I really want to do a multichapter Ron/Hermione set post DH, but in order to do that, I've told myself I must finish the three WIP's I have on the run. Two of those are Ron/Hermione, but very AU, so not so funny and light.
Thanks for your kind words.
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05/13/08 - 03:13PM |
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saritaaaa529
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"Arse Harry! Hermione doesn’t say arse!"
Lol. This was so cute. Short and sweet. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I think Ron was in a bit of a panic, and that seemed like the best way to convey it.
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05/12/08 - 10:55PM |
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laurieann
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Very good job with the characterization. Not too fluffy, there is just enough bite to the Ron, Hermione, Harry humor that you recognize them immediately. But I do think Ron's concern for Hermione is spot on as well; he's super protective of her and you just know he would be of thier unborn baby as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always struggled with humour in my fics; it always looks like I am trying to hard but I'm glad that it was just a touch of the right kind of humour and that you think I got the characters, especially Ron right, as he is the one I strive to understand the most. Thanks for the review. They mean a lot.
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05/12/08 - 01:26PM |
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RonHermioneForever246
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I loved it. That was so incredibly sweet, adorable, and hilarious. I can totally picture Ron worrying about her constantly, and fretting over every little thing. And poor Hermione - bed rest would be extremely hard for her, I'm sure. You've created a great story where they are very in-character. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I always love to hear that I have the characters spot-on; it does wonders for one's confidence when writing :)
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05/12/08 - 11:21AM |
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ProphecyOrb
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Oh, I really like it. Please continue.:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This was just a one-shot, but I have some other Ron/Hermione and the more obscure pairing of Neville/Pansy, so I will have some more stuff soon :)
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