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BooksnChess
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I loved it. It made me laugh =) So typical Ron and Hermione.
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Thanks! I'm glad they seemed in-character. |
07/08/09 - 07:13AM |
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cbmac12
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Mr. Oblivious as usual :) Sweet story tho!!! Love it!
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Well, fifteen year old boys aren't exactly famous for their insights into others, even when they're completely adorable. Thanks. |
04/09/09 - 06:16PM |
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JCowell1002
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Well Done, I loved story! I have a Harry Potter tattoo and part of it says Expecto Patronum and I loved that this story was about Ron and Hermiones. Thank You!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. That's a cool idea for a tattoo. I like the idea that the Patronus is so connected to the ideas of love and protection together. Rowling's a genius. |
01/15/09 - 11:24PM |
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phoniex_patronus
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what is it with the male sex?
(gosh this is ma first review, already im sure its making people hurl. i dont apolgise.)
fab story... like the bit at the end with the childhood bit.
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im going to stop writing reviews before people sue me.
Author's Response:
I'm so honored that your first review was for my sorry, and so I'm sorry for the delay in responding! I am glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for telling me so! |
09/03/08 - 04:42PM |
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theburrow
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awe!
Well I thought Ron Liked Hermione by then Hadnt be liked her since thefirst or second year...oh well I loved it it was rather complex though :]
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and took the time to review. Thanks! |
07/14/08 - 10:01PM |
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Kelsey
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beautiful story! i love the initial idea:D
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! |
06/17/08 - 10:06PM |
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pottermaniac
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It was so sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you liked it! |
06/11/08 - 06:44PM |
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fluffqueen
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Poor Hermione. Ron just does not have intuition into other people's feelings. Great story. I love how you tied in Hermione having a Jack Russell terrier and Ron with the River Otter. That all fit seamlessly. Also, Ron and Hermione were also both written very true to canon (e.g., Ron feeling low about his Patronus, because of comments from Fred & George, and Hermione being able to see the evidence of Ron's feelings for her in the way he cared about her not having friends as a child, liking her laugh, and thinking her brave, loyal, and clever, even if she was afraid he'd never admit it to himself and act on it. Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving such a positive and detailed review! It really helps give me both encouragement and an insight into how my writing is received. Cheers! |
06/06/08 - 09:40PM |
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harley
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hehe, Ron has always always reminded my of my college boyfriend (in fact we went to the movies dressed up together.. I was hermione of course with my bushy hair). And I think you captured Ron well here. Sounds a lot like a lot of conversations my old college flame and I had :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am really thrilled to hear that this could ring "true to life," so to speak. I am glad you enjoyed it! |
04/29/08 - 06:09PM |
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Ebony
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Aww... poor Mione. Ron can be so silly sometimes! This is a lovely little fic. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I am happy that you enjoyed the story. |
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