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piratewendy1
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Wonderful! So in character and readable! More, please! |
02/28/10 - 11:39PM |
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CallieDafreak
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Aw that was so sweet! Adorible...
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07/27/09 - 11:24PM |
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azyne
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This is simply fantastic. Love the intimate moment, love the abrupt but casual style of it all. It's great that you've captured a moment without much happening and without any dialogue at all, I'd normally have lost interest had your reflective tone not been so captivating.
If one thing struck me as a little inconsistent, it's that Harry might feel a little lonely amidst all his happy feelings for his friends. Remember that when he found them asleep holding hands and even when they kissed, he was glad for them but also a little self-pitying. Besides that, really good job. |
05/22/09 - 02:07PM |
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kaherashico
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This was very cute. =)
And I like the fact that it could have happened according to what we know from the books.
Well done! |
05/16/09 - 12:51PM |
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joyousnerd
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Beautifully done! |
03/29/09 - 08:31PM |
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chantel121
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I loved it. |
03/27/09 - 02:59AM |
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selene21
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so sweet |
03/02/09 - 10:44PM |
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txhpfan
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Beautifully written! This was my favorite line, " The Cannons finished at the bottom of the league, all Weasleys had red hair, and he was in love with one Hermione Granger."
This was such a sweet "missing moment" story. |
03/02/09 - 03:33PM |
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melakem
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"After all, he did have the nerve to be the love of her life." What a great line!
This was lovely. I like the gentle sweetness that you portray here. It's very touching, and I'm glad that Harry got to see the two together. |
02/27/09 - 12:30AM |
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