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maze
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Beautifully written. Puts a smile on my face.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad it made you smile! I was hoping I did Ron justice... :) |
01/27/08 - 09:18AM |
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frustrated
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it really really cute..
especially the "list" part..
=)
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought Ron would be thick enough to need his own "Guide to Hermione" :) |
01/02/08 - 11:40AM |
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fluffqueen
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This story put the BIGGEST GRIN on my face yet, out of all of your stories I've read so far! (And I've enjoyed everything of yours that I've read.)
It was a good idea to have the story begin from Harry's POV (more or less), since it grabs the reader's attention to see Ron and Hermione walking into the room wearing inside-out pajamas, with Ron soaking wet. (I was wondering if they'd been up to something naughty. Unfortunately, no, not yet.) That was a good choice, since it left the reader in suspense for a little bit about what was going on.
This was such a clever idea, to write a fic about Ron basically writing his own "self-help" book about interpreting what Hermione says to him. You wrote him very true to canon, and you captured how funny Ron is VERY WELL. I loved how they went from screaming bloody murder at each other to her kissing him on the cheek. Very appropriate to Ron and Hermione's ability in the books to start bickering out of nowhere and stop on a dime if someone (e.g., Harry) heads them off. I also liked the fact that Ron could admit to himself that she was right. That was big of him, even if he didn't really admit it out loud. I also liked how Hermione couldn't study since she was still infuriated with him and so curious about what he was doing. Having her walk over barefoot and read over his shoulder was a cute touch. I also liked that he didn't get all mad and defensive that she'd read his private list.
Excellent story!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I really wanted to write something funny, and Ron and Hermione are the perfect targets. I started from Harry's POV cuse like you said, Ron and Hermione looking like they had just been a little naughty could definitley get your attention. Ron really is funny, and I'm glad I got that right. I also wanted to show how quick they go from hating each other to making up two seconds later. Glad you thought that I did justice to canon! And Hermione... Curiousity killed the cat! I was thinking about having Ron get mad and defensive, but what kind of ending would that be? Besides, blowing up seems more like a Harry thing to do :) Thanks again for reveiwing all my stories! |
12/31/07 - 12:03AM |
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Roach76
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I love these two soooo much. I sort of wish JK would write a story/short story of these two.
Author's Response: I know! THy're soooooo adorable! Harry and Ginny used to be my fav ship, but when i started reading fanfics, i've sort of joined the good ship! |
12/10/07 - 08:43PM |
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Sternbetrachter
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cute story :)
will there be another chapter? one where they both admit that they are partly to blame for seeing each other naked? LOL
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm not sure if I'm doing another chapter, but if I do, Then I will have them admit that! lol. Lucky Hermione... *wink wink* ;) |
12/10/07 - 02:03PM |
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dtrumps
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oh! love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :)
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mina44
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awwww i love it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the reveiw! :) |
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