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gailbear
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Yay fluff! But it captures Ron perfectly! |
12/08/09 - 12:05PM |
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Chris
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Good story though a little too short^^ |
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HarryIsMyHero
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very cute and sweet and totally Ron! That's how their first "I Love You" should be said. Because when iits all gooey and romantic and not nervous it's soooooo OOC. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted it to be slightly akward and nervous too, because I figure that's how Ron would do it. :) Thanks again for the reveiw! Glad you liked it ;) |
06/01/08 - 03:46AM |
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Ditte
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soo cute. I totally just went OMG in the end. :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad the ending got the reaction I wanted! |
05/11/08 - 08:08PM |
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fluffqueen
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You really nailed Ron's tendency towards lack of self-confidence with the "but he was only Ron" part. Good job.
I really liked the way you wrote the romantic elements, too. You also kept Ron & Hermione's interaction just different enough from how you've written Harry & Ginny's relationship, and I wanted to compliment you on differentiating the two relationships.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Poor Ron really does have confidence issues, but I wasn't completly sure if I got it right. You really made my day with the compliment on Ron&Hermione and Harry&Ginny! I've been trying really hard to keep the seperation between the two relationships, because they really are very different. Thanks again!! :) |
12/30/07 - 11:16PM |
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mina44
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fabulous :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :) |
12/08/07 - 07:05PM |
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Cor-Bear!
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Gryffindor2418, you're AWESOME!
Author's Response: Wow, cori, thanks for that. *Imagine slight sarcasm here.* :) |
12/02/07 - 05:34PM |
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Nela
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Aww, so sweet. And you do all the characters so well! Are you going to write more?
Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure if I did hermione justice... I'm not sure if I'm writeing another chapter for this story, but my newest fic is multichapter, and should be up in about a week :) |
11/30/07 - 06:26PM |
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dreximgirl
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Really nice - great little add-on after Deathly Hallows
Thank You for sharing
:-) Drex
Author's Response: Thanks! I love writeing post-Dh stories! :) Gryffindor2418
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ronslady
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aw i loved absolutely loved the last line! too perfect, "she would say yes, no matter what he said, because he was ron,"... oh wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw! Not to sound concieted or anything, but I liked the last line too... Glad you enjoyed it! :) |
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