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HarryIsMyHero
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awww sooo sad! |
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fluffqueen
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Great job. I liked how you ended both POV's with almost the same exact words. Good insight into how both characters felt.
Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to end both POVs the same way, because I figured they were both far more upset than they let on. Also, I think they feel the same way about certain things. :) |
12/31/07 - 12:24AM |
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saphire
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This was brilliant, it surprised me to see it hasn't beeb beta-ed, you obviously took care when writing it, well done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to get a friend to Beta it, but I ended up reading it about 20 times! Glad you liked it! |
11/10/07 - 07:49AM |
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magabygc
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Its so sad...anyway, at least we know they are together noW!!
Author's Response: Yeah... I wansn't planning on writing this, but I found those song lyrics and I thought they fit perfectly. Thank god they got together!! |
11/10/07 - 07:13AM |
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Eglwlf
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May not of been beta'd, but I enjoyed the short story all the same...rough around the edges being of no importance to me since it was a short story after all. Have enjoyed all your stories and will keep an eye out for more.
Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Reveiws mean alot to me. I know it's a little rough... I tried to get one of my friends to beta, but no luck, sadly... Anyways, I'm glad you liked it! |
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