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freshwater
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Very powerful and very sensitively written. An excellent micro-snapshot of what had to have been an extremely difficult and emotional event for Hermione. Too bad JKR just skated over it, and didn't give it the consideration you did. Well done. |
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mollyw4
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Very well done. Thank you. |
08/31/07 - 09:01AM |
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Sassenach_mel
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oh, how I wanted this chapter. thank you! |
08/30/07 - 08:19PM |
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Bob Lablah
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Errrrrr.................... Hermione's mum's name is Jane NOT HELEN. Good Otherwise.
Author's Response: Actually, her parent's names were never specified in the books. I checked the Lexicon (http://www.hp-lexicon.org/wizards/granger.html) to make sure before I submitted this.
Thank you though, for being dilligent about things following canon. |
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ronslady222
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great story! very promising beginning! i can't wait to find out why she chose to obliviate her parents! pleasee update soon! =) |
08/30/07 - 12:29PM |
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PolyjuicePotion
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This could have come straight out of DH! |
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