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queenb23
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You are the master of missing moments, hon - I think you are channeling JKR herself!!! These are utterly brilliant - and the best/last is yet to come ... ;)
Author's Response: and you are too kind! *hugs* would never have gotten this far without you and Angel... |
06/18/07 - 07:39PM |
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kerosinkanister
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I thought you got the emotion down very well in this chapter, though I still hope Hermione has some realization that, as much as Ron hurt her, she's treated him quite badly at times and has given him very little positive encouragement in any way, romantic or otherwise.
Author's Response: *was waiting for you* :)
Just hang in there a bit longer.... |
06/18/07 - 02:12PM |
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Snowe
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I still don't think Ron has any idea how much he's hurt Hermione. He couldn't handle even hearing about her kiss Victor without treating her coldly and breaking their date; Hermione had to see it and hear about it for months. I know she's not perfect, but she suffered so much more for her mistakes than Ron did.
Author's Response: Men never do...
:)
I'm hoping the next chapter will bring it all together....
After that, Lavender gets her say... |
06/18/07 - 10:24AM |
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AmieAM
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I love the interaction in this chapter. The only thing is that I felt Hermione is not taking any of the blame for what happened. Although, it had to be difficult to watch the boy you fancy in the arms of another. I love these missing moments and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: wait for it.... :) |
06/18/07 - 09:02AM |
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Coconut
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Oh, that was a little heartbreaking but wonderfully written. Good job! I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks A! I'm glad you're enjoying it |
06/17/07 - 11:17PM |
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Annemarie
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Very nice dialogue. It seems like the sort of converation J.K would write for these two. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: And thank you for such a lovely compliment! I hope the next is as enjoyable... |
06/17/07 - 08:38PM |
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spidergirl
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That´s adorable! I loved the whole dialogue and Hermione holding Ron´s face :)
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks M! I'm glad you like it!
*is still working on your drabble* |
06/17/07 - 02:53PM |
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